Process Analysis
- In this paper I was told that I didn't include enough steps.
- And also I was told that my subject matter wasn't that paranoid.
Argumentation/Persuasion
- In this one my tone was too sarcastic.
- Also the satire which I had included was improper for the type of paper which I was writing.
Writing as Communication
- I needed to do more analysis of the conversation rather than repeating it.
- And also I didn't specify which Tannen article I was referring to in my paper.